Krystall Fasel
English 101
05/20/15
Taking
Stock of
Your
Work
1.
After reading and
analyzing the information I found out more about tattoos, laws, history along
with others ideas then I had previously know. I looked up information online
and found many different ideas. Taking down a number of notes on many different
opinion levels. Finding helpful information mainly from factual sites as the
opinionated sites seemed to try and lead you into their own objective
2.
I found that by taking
notes I was able to draft the essay into separate parts. Writing a few
different essays on the subjects covered in the completed full essay:
·
History of Tattooing,
beginning with the Iceman, the military influences, and the movements
throughout American culture.
·
My opinions and feeling
on the subject.
·
Medical responses.
·
Religious responses.
·
The current tattoo and
how it effects work place and professionalism.
3.
Taking these different parts
I organized them into one final essay. Putting together the pieces I had to
delete and change some information as it was redundant or unnecessary.
4.
Using historical and
recent information coming from many viewpoints I believe that I have without a
doubt shown evidence that supports the analysis of the information I have shared.
It may not make you change your mind about your opinions but it will make you
think about things in a different light.
5.
With my love for all art
and my curiosity for history, I was able to blend together the fundamental
ideas I was trying to get across. I think my essay is a very interesting read
for anyone, not just people interested in tattoo culture.
6.
Finding new information
daily and wanting to add it in. Keeping to the 1500 word limit is very
challenging. I need to pinpoint the key ideas and really dive in deeper.
7.
Using photos throughout
history definitely gives the essay a feeling of how historical the commitment
to tattoos are. It’s not just a hipster trend, it’s a way for any person to
make a statement. The pictures simply showed exactly what I was writing about.
8.
Allowing others to read
the essay in the many different draft forms proved to be beneficial when trying
to figure out what to cut out. I had too many topics and was not able to
elaborate on them all.
9.
For the next paper I
would really love to travel to some of the places I write about. Perhaps even
get an interview or two to base my ideas on. Having firsthand information can
sometimes make for a better paper.
10.
Loving history made studying
the subject amusing. I think this had a huge impact on how my essay turned out.
Reading the ideas of many people and researching all of the different opinions.
I am very pleased with the work I have put into this essay.
11.
Writing small essays and
taking notes on many opinions makes the completed paper more accomplished.
Taking in opposing sides of my ideas allowed me to address them and perhaps change
the minds of others.
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